Should smoking be allowed in public places in Japan? Why or why not?

The following is my essay that I wrote as an assignment for an English school AEON:

Topic: Should smoking be allowed in public places in Japan? Why or why not?
Style: Formal

Regarding this subject, there have been long-lasting controversies between smokers and non-smokers in Japan. Let me marshal points of both sides briefly:

Smokers – smoking should be allowed in public places:
– Smokers are paying a huge amount of tax. The annual amount reaches around 2 Trillion JPY ($18 Billion). Since smokers are contributing a lot to the national budget, they maintain the right to smoke wherever they want.
– Given that drinking alcohol is not prohibited at all in public places in Japan, why should smoking be prohibited? Please note that drinking alcohol in public is strictly prohibited in Australia, for example.
– Nicotine can activate the human brain and increase willingness so that we can prevent depression or other mental disorders and enhance working efficiency.
– Government should not control each individual’s taste. It is the start of fascism since Nazi Germany tried to promote “a healthy empire” by banning smoking.
– Many smokers are now shifting to an electronic cigarette that usually do not harm bystanders.

Non-smokers – smoking should be banned in public places:
– Secondhand smoke contains diversified toxic chemicals that harm bystanders who just breath in the vicinity of smokers.
– In restaurants, the smell of smoke damages the taste of served dishes.
– Smoking increases the risk of fire in public places.
– There might be people who are suffering from asthma or bronchitis in the nearness of smokers.
– Smoking induces many types of diseases including lethal one such as lung cancer so that it increases the cost of our health care insurance system.
– Children or young students might be lured to smoke by seeing some adults are smoking in public spaces.

Both sides have legitimacy in one way or another. It is clear, however, that the number of smokers has been continuously decreasing so that they are becoming a clear minority in Japan. Smokers must be louder in insisting their right otherwise they will lose places to smoke freely more and more.

NHK杯戦囲碁 許家元碁聖 対 小林覚9段

昨日のNHK杯戦の囲碁(先週に続き、今週もTOEICのため録画で視聴)は、黒番が許家元碁聖、白番が小林覚9段です。布石は両者星打ちという、最近では珍しいものでしたが、左下隅で競り合いが始まり、ほとんど見たことがない展開になりました。許碁聖が白に対して覗いたのに、白が反発しましたが、黒は下辺の黒に利かしてから、出切りを決行しようとしました。しかし白は途中で手を抜いて、覗いた黒を取り込みました。代償で黒は下辺で白4子を取り込みましたが、残った下辺の白は死んでおらず、この別れは白の小林9段が許碁聖の強烈なパンチをうまくかわしたという印象で、白が悪くなかったと思います。その後も白は黒のパンチをかわしたり、時には隠忍自重の手を打って我慢し、各所で地を稼いで白優勢な局面で進みました。黒は右上隅の石が弱く、また真ん中の石も左辺と切り離されると弱いですが、許碁聖は単につながるような手は打たず、上辺に踏み込んだ勝負手を放ちました。この勝負手はかなり無理気味で、黒ははっきり二つに分断され、両方をしのぐのはかなり大変そうでした。しかし許碁聖はその後も強手を連続し、結局左辺の白と中央の黒の振り替わりになりました。この振り替わりは白地の方が大きく、これで白勝勢かと思ったのですが、そこからの許碁聖の粘りが素晴らしく、結局中央の黒を攻め取りにし、左辺での白3子の抜きを先手にし、これで黒がかなり形勢を持ち直したどころか逆転したようです。その後ヨセで劫を含む小競り合いが続きましたが、黒地が優り、小林9段の投了となりました。